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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-06-07 10:03 PM


You can always call me
Even if you hate me
Even If I hate you
Ill always be there

You can always cry on my shoulder
Even if you haven’t talked to me in years
Even if I haven’t talked to you in years
Ill always be there

You can always talk to me
Even if youtry to ignore me
Even if I try to ignore you
I’ll always be there

You can alwayshurt me
Even if you were nice to me the day before
Even if I was nice to you the day before
I’ll always be there

You can always hit me
Even if you weren’t mad at me
Even if I wasn’t mad at you
I’ll always be there

You can always scream at me
Even if you’re a stranger on the street
And Im just passing by
I’ll always be there

You can always judge me
Even if your no better yourself
Even ifI did nothing worse than be myself
I’ll always be there

You can always take my money
Even if you have plenty
Even if I have little
I’ll always be there

I’ll always be here
Looking out for you
No matter what you did to me
Or I did to you
I’ll always be there

© Copyright 2003 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
crimson tear
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 76
Massachusetts
1 posted 2003-06-07 10:11 PM


went a little heavy on the duality for my taste but not a bad one.
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-06-07 10:22 PM


nice write,,, being there is a true friend...

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

laurie
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
3 posted 2003-06-07 10:30 PM


not bad, sara. l like.
it reminds me of what l wish l could say to a couple people in my life, if only l knew how...
well done.
laurie.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-06-07 10:34 PM


I really enjoyed this. It spoke a lot of truth.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-06-08 04:26 AM


beautiful!
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