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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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alone i break the silence alone i drink my tea lowercase are my thoughts capitalized are my dreams alone i drench my disappointments in the pouring rain alone i write this rambling mess alone i purge silently alone i mend this open wound... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
"lowercase are my thoughts capitalized are my dreams" WOW. GREAT write... I could feel that depth of profound, aching loneliness... beautiful and bittersweet. This truly reached and touched me. And I have been here, too... Your thoughts and dreams are ALL capitalized...raise them up to where you want them to be, give them wings and let them soar. here's to YOU in ALL CAPS!  Moca |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "lowercase are my thoughts capitalized are my dreams" i think its kind of opposite though, dreams are dreams, life is the daily routine that you cant escape......the capital, since it is precedent but i liked the concepts you evoked |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
as long as you purge and not keep this s in |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I think without dreams we would sometimes be lost in our troubles of reality. I also think that we should not let anything keep us from having hope and dreams. This is a very good write. Hugs  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris: sometimes alone is the best way to grow - I know - easier said than done . . . toss this one to the wind missy xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how that is...and sometimes it's best that way, for awhile |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
alone i break the silence alone i drink my tea lowercase are my thoughts capitalized are my dreams wow oh wow. yes, yes, yes. thats all i can think to say. i'm keeping this. much love, gem xxxx |
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