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Open Poetry #26

It Was You

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

0 posted 2003-06-07 06:57 PM

A whisper fell soft
upon my face,
a trace of a thought
voiceless in a breath
daring to leave the
safety of sweet lips
and meditative mind
to find me here
to let me know
that there is
truth in
Love.

And it was you.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-06-07 07:39 PM

CinnamonGirl~
ANOTHER deep *sigh* emitted from this poetess~

Your words brush the page in whispers~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-08 04:39 AM

I second that!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-06-08 02:40 PM

I love your style and the content. You are beautifully inspired.
Love, Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-06-09 07:18 PM

Beautiful!
Love,
Eric

Kellsue
Member

since 2000-05-06

Posts 210
Waukesha, WI USA

5 posted 2003-06-09 07:20 PM

Beautiful poem Cinnamon!

~Kelly

You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving
There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

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