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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-06-07 06:03 PM

You awake pinned
to the bed by the gravity of it
gun metal taste in your mouth
there's no time to heal
at 6 am its time for work
there's no room for hope
when you have a ride to catch
you stitch what you can
and hope that it holds

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-06-07 06:05 PM

Not sure I have all of this, but you never
cease to amaze with the ability to write
what is sometimes tragic, sometimes kinda
ho-humm and many other emotes...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-06-07 06:11 PM

Thank B, this is simply about depression and how it feels having to fight it off just in time to go to work and get through the day

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-06-07 06:11 PM

you stitch what you can
and hope that it holds

just to make it through the day, rough one here, not too hopeful, but that's the what it be sometime,

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-07 06:12 PM

you slipped in as i was writing..yeah maybe one day..sure maybe

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-06-07 07:49 PM

I know this. Dragging out of bed with the sack of rocks on your back, putting on the face....

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-07 07:54 PM

. . . I felt like this this morning . . .
pinned to the bed - but in a different way
God not that!
Panic . . . has the same draw . . .

This one feels like - just icky
you know?

amazing writing
had me breathless there every line
the pinned and the stitching . . .
feel like a ragdoll most days . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-07-2003 07:56 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-06-07 09:51 PM

thanks Kahlil and Sue, not the greatest feeling no thanks for reading

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-06-08 04:30 AM

come here you

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-06-08 12:39 PM

thanks Dixie hugs back

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

10 posted 2003-06-09 05:33 PM

awesome

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

11 posted 2003-06-09 05:54 PM

never been there Raph, but I love someone who has, and you describe it with perfect clarity. there is hope, so hang in there. BTW sorry about messing that other thread up so bad.

[This message has been edited by Edder (06-09-2003 05:55 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-06-09 11:05 PM

thanks Brad

edder thanks for the compliment but which other thread? the serenity?

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