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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-06-07 05:28 PM


24
hours i
have seen delight
hours we spent
loving were
24

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-07 05:30 PM


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Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-06-07 10:06 PM


You are really enjoying the "short with a punch" type of poetry,  aren't ya.  I do
too...  

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-06-07 10:35 PM


This is so true. I really enjoyed this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2003-06-08 12:04 PM


QjQ...A short piece that packs a powerful punch. This was so well-crafted and so insightful. ***Ivy Rose
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-08 04:03 AM


Nice job Q

I have no idea how you do this . . .
xxoo

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-08 04:04 AM



Midnitesun
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7 posted 2003-06-08 11:27 AM


how delightful!
it's an honor to be a poetic inpiration, thank you Q! but don't forget to get at least an hour of sleep each day   

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-08-2003 11:29 AM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2003-06-08 06:09 PM


Wonderful!  

Hugs, Marti

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