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Selina
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

0 posted 2003-06-07 04:32 PM

Trapped in a world of nothing
The walls bend, but never break.
How much longer is the waiting?
How much more can my soul take?

Living a life of nothing
The excitement never peaks.
My freedom talks
But never speaks.

Loving one who loves nothing
True love I will never reach.
I am the one who is always learning,
And he is the one to teach.

Trusting my life to nothing
Your lies I can't tolerate
I know you really love me
But you only show me hate.

I am alone and I feel nothing
As we say farwell and separate.
I'd always thought we'd last forever
But now we've found a different fate.

I look at you and see nothing
As you let a tear fall from your eye.
If it is true you never loved me
There is no deception as you cry.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-07 05:44 PM

Somehow I would feel grateful that there is no deception, however sad it is.

Welcome Selina~

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2003-06-07 05:51 PM

very nice. a sad time for him and a new beginning for you, love the subject matter. peace

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-06-07 05:58 PM

(big hugggssssssss) It is his loss, and he is unworthy of you...and I know very soon you will find that special somebody who can actually feel you from the start! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-06-07 06:29 PM

Selina - sad write from what I read, but I sense a warm heart from one of this pen...

BC

Selina
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

5 posted 2003-06-07 09:08 PM

Thank you so much, everyone. Your sweet, kind words are touching.
Fortuneately, this is an old poem of mine, and true love has been found, and we've been married for ten years

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2003-06-07 11:26 PM

S~

beautiful write! you have such an amazing talent, so good to see you here!

take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-08 04:23 AM

sad

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-06-08 06:37 AM

Fortunately...James

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2003-06-08 07:19 AM

A heartwrenching poem whether it is old or new.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Selina
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

10 posted 2003-06-09 04:07 PM

Aimster! Hiya!

Thanks for your kind words.

And thanks for pointing me in the direction of PiP!

passingshadows, JamesMichael, and Kethry, thank you, I'm glad you liked my poem

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