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Selina
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since 2003-06-07
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Philadelphia, PA, USA

0 posted 2003-06-07 02:04 PM


Look at me.
I bet you see
Someone you think I should be-
Sweet
Innocent
Calm
Cool.
While inside my head rages
With words my heart can't rule.
You don't know me,
Don't let my looks fool you.
I'm a bad girl, I'm naughty
If I want to show you.

Who Am I?
You'll never know.
Who Am I?
If I don't want it to show.
If you always judge by looks
You'll never know what you'll see.

I can pretend to be
Anyone I want to be
So when you look at me
Be careful what you see
Cause I might be
Someone you don't want to see
Or I might be
Your dream, you see
And then I might be
Your demise you see
For to mess with me
You will see,
Someone you thought you'd never see.
ME.

© Copyright 2003 Sharon Daws - All Rights Reserved
SarBear
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1 posted 2003-06-07 02:09 PM


Selina-I understand exactly what you mean in this.  keep it up!!
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-07 02:10 PM


I always say "what you see is what you get" and I don't like wearing faces.
Selina
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3 posted 2003-06-07 02:12 PM


SarBear - thank you so much.. I'm glad you understand

passingshadows- Exactly.  Thank you so much for enjoying my words.

Thanks everyone!

Tim
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4 posted 2003-06-07 06:07 PM


Not only can we never know the true essence of another, we also never truly know ourselves.  Enjoyed your poem.
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5 posted 2003-06-07 06:11 PM




(smiles) Hurry...it's a limited time offer, absolutely zero down! (big hugggsssssss) One can never promise nothing from someone, what matters is simply being YOU and not trying wearing another face, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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