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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-06-07 12:20 PM


Staring into your moonshade eyes
Your vision borrowing mine,
I blush and hide my smile
You always say it brings your soul to life.

Touching your fingertips is like
Touching a cloudless sky.
You lay your ear against my heart
And it beats only for you.

The laugh you free from the depths
Of this tense, guarded soul
Is one I've never heard before
One of crystals of the sweetest sugar

And as we dance atop
The mountain that is ours
We need not a drop of music...
Just the harmony of our hearts.

And nothing else compares.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-06-07 12:24 PM


KoKo - a most soft write of feelings deep within...

BC

Startime55
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2 posted 2003-06-07 12:24 PM


*sigh* two hearts that beat in harmony creating a living dance all their own...what could be more beautiful and romantic as that....Wonderful writing...

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-06-07 12:27 PM


KoKo, this is a very beautiful and romantic write.
You know that this hopeless romantic loves it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-06-07 12:50 PM


Thanks everyone!!!! You're sweethearts !!
Love is quite a  sweet, soft, beautiful thing !!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-07 02:37 AM


"And nothing else compares"

just beautiful!

Edder
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6 posted 2003-06-07 08:31 AM


you already know what i'm going to say... it's good to see this from you, makes my soul rest easier. you continue to amaze me.
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-06-08 10:33 PM




(smiles) Yep, nothing else compares and I truly wish for this kind of robin egg blue sky to always shine in your hearts horizon and you can paint your very own clouds! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

gyiel marlok
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8 posted 2003-06-08 10:47 PM


koko,simply sweet hon.
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