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Startime55
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0 posted 2003-06-06 11:56 PM


This Kind Of Love

A gentle whisper tickles the ear
warm breath that sends shivers down the spine
Softest lips leave a trail to endear
tasting of the most sensual wine

Strong arms encircle holding her close
while fingers tangle tight in dark hair
Eyes aflame, her desire to expose
with a rising fire that he’s aware

Red lips parting with invitation
sweet breath sending out silent message
Two hearts beat in acceleration
each allowing the other passage

This kind of love gives timeless pleasure
when passions flare beneath stars and moon
So hold tight to love, it’s a treasure
and let him kiss you into a swoon

Startime




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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-06-06 11:58 PM


Startime55 - your words are of a heart filled with romance, my best to you...

BC

Larry C
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2 posted 2003-06-06 11:58 PM


Karen,
Swooning? Now we're telling our age! LOL Lovely write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Startime55
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3 posted 2003-06-07 12:01 PM


Thank you Bill...that is a great compliment coming from one who writes romance with such beauty as you do...hugs

***giggling*** don't you love it, Larry, when you don't care who knows your age...I wouldn't want to be younger for anything...It is too much fun being **older** Hugs to you..

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4 posted 2003-06-07 03:11 AM


beautiful write, enjoyed
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5 posted 2003-06-08 12:14 PM


nice write
Magnus
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6 posted 2003-06-08 12:57 PM


You have not lost your touch, have ya?

Nope,  don't think you ever will..

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7 posted 2003-06-08 01:32 PM


I   t h i n k   t h i s   g o e s   i n t o   m y   l i b r a r y . . . .

....and you into my list of folks I read every word of....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Margherita
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8 posted 2003-06-08 01:57 PM


Your name is so appropriate! So romantically sensual.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2003-06-08 02:10 PM


This kind of love gives timeless pleasure
when passions flare beneath stars and moon
So hold tight to love, it’s a treasure
and let him kiss you into a swoon


Karen, I don't guess that I was here before when you were, but I sure am glad that I am now. You write right down my alley, Startime......the sweet, romantic, dreamy road that I love to walk on.

This is so sensual and loving...and you know that I love it!!  
Hugs to you, Lady  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-08-2003 02:11 PM).]

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-06-08 03:56 PM


Silky...James
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11 posted 2003-06-08 05:00 PM


Beautiful Karen...so very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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12 posted 2003-06-09 01:21 PM


I loved this! *S*
Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-06-09 01:29 PM


---that "Kind of Love" is my "Kind of Love"...

Warm hugs,
EA

ethome
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14 posted 2003-06-09 03:44 PM


"Red lips parting with invitation
sweet breath sending out silent message
Two hearts beat in acceleration
each allowing the other passage"

Such warm open poetry Karen you have such a good heart....very nicely written!

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15 posted 2003-06-09 11:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Karen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I have this dream ever so mnuch and really want to live this kind of experience as I haven't yet held loves hand! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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