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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-06 09:41 PM



rain falls endlessly,
poetry gathers along the trees,
thoughts shed beneath, joining puddles,
tears resonate with sadness, locked in circles
descending into streams, finding solace in the sea

.........thank you....to those who cared.........

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-06-2003 09:43 PM).]

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Larry C
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-06-06 09:49 PM


All's well that ends well?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-06-06 09:51 PM


Beautiful...and yes, there are many who care.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-06-06 10:52 PM


its nice to find some that i never knew did.......thanks....
Magnus
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4 posted 2003-06-06 11:21 PM


I care...when someone has a tear,  a frown
or feeling down..  I care..  and I hope you
feel better soon.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-07 03:24 AM



bklynboy
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florida
6 posted 2003-06-07 07:32 AM


Nice write....short, sweet, to the point and as usual, very good!
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-06-07 05:08 PM


Ascending now that you're back on the blue
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-06-07 05:46 PM


Michele~  Bless your heart and soul!
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
9 posted 2003-06-08 02:48 AM


. . . and may the sea of words continue to comfort . . .  

nice up there Michele
xxoo

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