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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-06-06 06:54 PM



beaming light


I saw a light
beaming at me
blinding as at it may
the silhouette of you
keeping my heart alive
out of the darkness
that brought this soul
changing
as rays move thru the sky
fixed upon eyes remembrance
your love will never ride
rays of light
beaming at me
maybe some other time.
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bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2003 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2003-06-06 07:02 PM


Kool, my friend..

jwesley

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-06-06 07:09 PM


Great write Bernie!
Love youe new pic..
and thanks for signing my guestbook!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-06-06 07:15 PM


Love is a  beam of light indeed~  This read like a slow sail crossing the sunset.  I could almost feel the wind in passing, and the longing to chase it.

Very pretty never the less~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-06-06 08:44 PM


You are writing with so much feeling lately...nice going
I am enjoying your spirit, Bernie

M

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