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Feeling for the Floorboard
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Feeling for the Floorboard |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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You can miss a million miles if your eyes ar’nt facing forward; ---pass a perfect path feeling for maps down on your floorboard. Don’t try to measure up your future by the passing day Its like swinging for the fences with your eyes glued to the scoreboard. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kevin's back! Are you going to stick around for awhile and pester the old folk, Kev? Hope so...  Welcome home! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! wow! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
KEVIN! this is great, and an honest truthful write of wisdom. PS, it's really good to see your smiling face again. Missed you! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Such wisdom in these amazing words...Very well said, Kevin... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
there's a nice percussion of syllable working here that really works well when read aloud, fast.. It was so nice? I think I'll go back and do it again!  Enjoyed. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I agree with Serenity, I like your style and I'm glad to see you back here. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thanks guys, its good to be back Havent written in a long time, was playing around with illiteration and this popped out, glad you liked it |
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