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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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gazing me mirror gazing watching self images finding our memories nothing without you . . . . bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awww..I remember those same feelings...they eventually dissipated (well at least I didn't see them in the "mirrorscape" anymore *s)  M |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love this Bernie!! Well done. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
bslicker - nice write with many lonely thoughts... BC |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It often takes two to create the best memories...but sometimes being alone with ourselves can create some wonderful ones as well...this poem holds sadness but in ways even the sadness can hold hope...Well written feelings... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bernie, my friend, you said a lot in these few words. It will pass, though, then the good memories will be precious. Hugs to you  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
memories hurt when you can't make more |
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