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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-06 12:38 PM


Fighting solves nothing
Abusive speech creates
More problems
Hitting loved ones
Teaches them to hit back

Make the hurting stop
And one day
If you do
All the pain
Will go away

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-06-06 01:39 PM


How true that is.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-06-06 01:44 PM


so sad u write of such pain.........so succinct tho in its few lines
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-06-06 11:50 PM


I love your purity Julie.

This is just...so sweet it's intense.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-06-07 12:14 PM


the_loner_23 - I sense your pain in these words you write. One can change it, just need the fortitude to do so... My best to you...

BC

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2003-06-07 12:18 PM


From experience I can tell you that no matter how many years have gone by...when you have lived this kind of hurting...it stays with you forever...Strange as it may sound it has made me more tender hearted...*hug**

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