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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-06-06 09:39 AM




His heart beat
in perfect time
rise and fall of breath
with my every rhyme
understanding
my intention
questioning not-
my devotion
all the while,
softly humming
gently.....strumming
my life’s melody
knowing he
was the poetry...
in me


~SEA~


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1 posted 2003-06-06 09:40 AM


(smiling) then he knows indeed how lucky he is...


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2 posted 2003-06-06 09:40 AM



A worthy dream...
indeed.

How much you've grown
in your writing,
SEA...

a blessing to us all.

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3 posted 2003-06-06 09:45 AM


SEA - and the words that you pen from the poetry inside you is excellent...

BC

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4 posted 2003-06-06 09:51 AM


---and we are lucky indeed, that you share with us the eloquent poetry that is within you!

Warm hugs, Sweet Sea,
EA

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5 posted 2003-06-06 10:50 AM


I love to read the poetry in you. too.
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6 posted 2003-06-06 11:12 AM


Might he be a very lucky man and you a very
inspired woman.  Well said Susan...

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7 posted 2003-06-06 11:18 AM


Lovely Susan..may he always be the poetry in you.
Very softly spoken...much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2003-06-06 11:46 AM


SEA....Beautiful, inspire of love, and poem!
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9 posted 2003-06-06 03:36 PM


Lovely...James
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10 posted 2003-06-06 03:47 PM


Sea...you've out done yourself! Beautiful.

jwesley

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11 posted 2003-06-06 03:50 PM


Oh, Sea....I  know this,
because my Love and I  ARE.

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-06-2003 04:03 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-06-06 05:18 PM


Just beautiful. I have been really enjoying your work.


Patricia

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13 posted 2003-06-06 09:54 PM


Susan,
Lucky guy. Life can't get better than that!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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14 posted 2003-06-06 10:41 PM


I'm keeping this SEA!! Love it! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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15 posted 2003-06-07 12:30 PM


Beautiful and delicate, SEA
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16 posted 2003-06-07 12:32 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! What a magnificent way of putting it....Your talent shines in this one SEA...

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beautiful writing!
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18 posted 2003-06-07 11:33 AM


thank you all very very much....you guys are too nice
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19 posted 2003-06-07 06:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Susan, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, this hums another beautiful poem in itself, the sound of true love, performed by two hearts that relate together in harmony! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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20 posted 2003-06-07 07:04 PM


Ah, lucky is the man who can be that. You inspire.

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21 posted 2003-06-07 07:16 PM


enjoyed
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22 posted 2003-06-09 01:01 PM


gently.....strumming
my life’s melody
knowing he
was the poetry...
in me

How very, very beautiful. *S* It's good to read you again, SEA! *S*

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23 posted 2003-06-09 04:56 PM


This is such a lovely poem.. I really like it
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24 posted 2003-06-09 05:48 PM


a very touching write... I hope he knows how fortunate he is.
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25 posted 2003-06-10 06:01 AM


Who ever HE is, he is obviously your muse and canvas, to which you create your best work. as ever you write true poetry. i like to do some prose, but mostly my work RYMES, which your work does, well written and thank you... rose.


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26 posted 2003-06-11 01:17 AM


And you are his song!  Beautiful Sea.
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28 posted 2003-06-11 11:44 AM


Ah... sheer beauty
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