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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-06-06 07:28 AM



Sending You Thoughts  

I awaited his updates
None could I see
Had he no news
Where could he be

Catch up to you soon
He often would say
Here I am waiting
Checking each day

A keep in touch note
Would be suffice
Times of sharing
Had always felt nice

A quick morning hello
A goodnight kiss
Caring greetings
Simple things I miss  

The forever's that last
Steadfast and true
I have a memory
I hope you have too

Sending you thoughts
I shall reach openly
In another reminder
To jog your memory

HopeĀ©2003

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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
1 posted 2003-06-06 07:52 AM


Oh gosh I had one like this.  I went through the same thing.  I mean exactly.  You said it all.  The strangest guy and very illusive, but I think that is why I liked him so much.  He had the heart of a poet.  He was a writer of thoughts, but not poetry.

It is amazing...you always think you have the patent on some event that happens in your life until you come here to Passions Place.

Well done!


Patricia

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2003-06-06 07:58 AM


Thanks Patricia , this guy is not a poet neither , but it was  because of him that I began to write

Yes his words mean so much
Thats why I always love to keep in touch

Hope

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