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brezee
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since 2003-06-02
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0 posted 2003-06-06 04:53 AM



All I Want Is You

You have special powers
Awesome, beyond belief
When I am down you look
At me and give relief.

Im sure you know of this
You've seen it all before
But if your gift was gone
You I would still adore.

It's this weird connection
That gives my heart to you
If i had a problem
You would know what to do.

So use this great power
When you think you have to
But it's not only that
It's everything you do.

The sound of your sweet voice
Lingering in my mind
Makes me wonder how you
Can be so sweet and kind.

Everything you can do
Seems so perfect and right
I want to be with you
Forever, day and night.

So I give you my heart
You are the one I trust
You have powers in you
And use them if you must...
...But all I want is you.


~*~*brezee*~*~

...this one was hard b/c every line has 6 syllables and i thought it was cool.

© Copyright 2003 brezee - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-06 05:02 AM


very cool write, nicely done!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-06-07 01:10 PM


It's the whole package that binds us.

Enjoyed, and *Welcome*

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-06-07 01:23 PM


very nice, brezee
NICE TO MEET YOU! Welcome to Passions

Manth88
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since 2003-06-15
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4 posted 2003-06-15 02:02 AM


This is great, u did and awesome job.

!*^Manth88^*!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-15 05:39 AM


Beautiful flow...James
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