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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
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0 posted 2003-06-06 01:10 AM


Cant let anyone see into my mind
i cant cut down the weeds that have grown
no way to find the torch to make a light
I just need to see through this fight
Theres no need for me to struggle I will just lose
I wish for my life that i could be inside someone elses shoes
Why cant I be someone else
put loneliness up on the shelf
I just need a break
what will it take
I just cant shake these feelings
that tell me ill never be good enough
how can i just learn to lighten up.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-06 04:15 AM


good questions, only you can answer.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-06-06 11:28 AM


Can't let anyone see into my mind...

~*~

Ah Sara...not true!  Especially if you are going to be the poet you want to be...

we're always shaking away the cobwebs, and letting folks peek in...


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