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Hushed Against The Night
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Hushed Against The Night |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As twilight falls, my heart recalls Lunged forward in my chest, poised syllables Yet willow is the mood around me Can you hear, the faint percussion that has found me? A vapor in the breeze to softly find That certain sunset space, held gently in your mind There beside you in a pocket my accompany Can you hear, the faint distinguish that becomes me? Be it June or sweet October none the better As sun sets down upon my heart it’s tag and fetter Brought to color on my lips there keeps resounding Can you hear, this faintly beating love now sounding? As twilight dims the leaves in hymns Hushed gently to be known of weightless skims Yet harbored in my heart, your soft envision Can you hear, that I am near, as love’s decision? As twilight falls, my heart recalls Lingered on into the dawn, the nighttime stalls There beside you, as your lips but settle on me Can you hear, each breath so clear, in dusk upon me? Copyright Kkh 6/05/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (06-05-2003 10:22 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You make it hard to pick and choose my favorite verse. Kathleen, this is just too beautiful! Oh, but that last line~ Oh, solo mia~ Love your writing TD~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful..exquisitely penned Kathleen. Very much enjoyed m'friend. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful heartfelt write again |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
classic TD missed your style, not seen in many other forums,,,,,,,,, and i've been looking around the cyberworld in these 60days |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yet willow is the mood around me This one line says much about the mood of another very well written write. Nicely done K. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - a most tender beautiful writing from the heart... BC |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh...I love how you weave nature into your poems...I capture such beautiful visions from your words...Thank you...**hugs** |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, I love the questions in this piece...really draws the reader into the read. Sort of almost, well, interactive. I imagined the sounds I would hear. Ahh...you write wonderfully.  Patricia |
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