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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
No one knows Just why the wind blows Or where it goes When it's gone. No one knows the answers To my constant questions, My babbling confusion. No one knows this pain This constant pounding of my lungs And my heart is bleeding, pouring... Too many people've pricked it. And in the night when all is still I take a breath and pray at will That tomorrow will never reach its dawn As an unborn fawn Thrown away. And when today is gone And tomorrow has not come I'll think of you As I always do And wish you were with me To whisk me away Into the dawning day And dying night. And together we will be One last night That lasts Forever. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write and read,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. We all have those feelings. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me too...one last night...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
amazing, you just get better and better.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 i can relate |
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