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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-06-06 11:10 AM



Back Again
~ By Sue ~

Maybe I will never be
A poet as good as you
But I write my feelings out
At times I write my thoughts out too

I can not always express
The feelings I have inside
Or let anyone even know
How much I have really cried

Sometimes the pain comes back again
Then there are times it leaves me be
But, just when I think it is gone
One more time it comes back to me

I look forward to the day it is gone for good
Even though there were things I never understood

6-6-03


© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-06-06 11:14 AM


Sue,  relationships can be bitter or sweet or
even bland...  So many questions we often
have.  

You pen your thoughts well,  and you are a
poet..

BTW...I like that fish!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-06-06 11:16 AM


Hey Sue!
So good to have you back!!
And..you most certainly are a poet!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-06-06 11:23 AM


SmartChick - nice to see you, and my best to you...

BC

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-06 11:44 AM


Sue, you do express your feelings very well. I know that sinking feeling when out of the clear blue you get hit with painful memories and almost crippling emotions, but believe me, the episodes do lessen in severity, they come less often and don't last as long. In time they will all be just faint distant memories! Remember, "...and this too shall pass!"


Linda

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5 posted 2003-06-06 11:48 AM


Sue, my sweet little friend,
I know exactly how you feel about thinking you can't write as good as some of the other people. But, Lady, I want to tell you that you  are a poet. You write your feelings from the heart and that's a very good thing. Thank you for being YOU.
Heart hugs to you          
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-06-2003 11:49 AM).]

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state of mind
6 posted 2003-06-06 12:17 PM


very well expressed, for i know i took a long vacation from the net

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Nightshade
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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-06-06 12:40 PM


Dear Sue, This is a special write....you know why? Because you have come so far and don't even realize it. Don't allow that pain of "shoulda" "woulda" "coulda"....or the "if only" to cloud your bright light. Keep smilin' and be proud of yourself. hugs across the miles, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Larry C
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8 posted 2003-06-07 12:03 PM


Sue,
Life. Can't live without it!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Startime55
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9 posted 2003-06-07 12:07 PM


Your words sing and express well much of what I could never say...Stay true to yourself and your talent will ever be this great...My heart goes out to you that you feel such pain but you are blessing us by sharing it with us so that we in some small way can help you heal by hearing your pain...**hugs**

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-06-07 03:08 AM


you are beautiful and you are loved. Never forget it!
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