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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-06-05 09:26 AM


“INNOCENCE OF YOU”

Moonlight caresses a
rose garden,
petals are closed
with nights
sleep, as they remind
me of the
innocence
of you…
~~~~
Bill Charles

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Patricia
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1 posted 2003-06-05 09:31 AM


Ahhhh. One collective sigh in the romantic beauty of this verse.


Patricia

vandana
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2 posted 2003-06-05 09:56 AM


enjoyed
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-06-05 11:17 AM


Your eyes have captured pure sweetness.
Wonderful, Bill.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-06-05 01:05 PM


Great night time gaden of beauty

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2003-06-05 01:05 PM


nice
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-06-05 02:03 PM


I enjoyed the innocence and purity of this lovely poetic expression of love...

Moonlight & Roses,
EA

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7 posted 2003-06-05 02:05 PM


Beautiful Bill..love this short and to the point write.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

gemjop
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8 posted 2003-06-05 03:30 PM


~~Moonlight caresses a
rose garden~~

what a vision. Oh you're a petal Bill, always full of such loveliness.

much enjoyed as always.

lots of love , gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-06-05 03:34 PM


Lovely as always, Bill.

hugs
M

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2003-06-05 03:35 PM


Oh, how very pretty Bill.
Nice work. TD

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-06-05 05:26 PM


One of your best Bill...James
NewEnglandlazurlu
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12 posted 2003-06-05 07:11 PM


BC, so few words, so much love and affection. You are a wonder dear man.

Hugs and Smiles, Marti

Ivy Rose
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13 posted 2003-06-06 12:43 PM


Bill...Clever verse and, oh so, romantic besides. I love the Rose and its use in this poem. Somehow, a Rose speaks of the beauty and the innocence of love. ***Ivy Rose
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14 posted 2003-06-06 12:45 PM


Bill, this is beautiful.
Hugs  
Ethel

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-06-07 01:58 PM


Bill:

I do beleive this one is my favorite - you say it all in so few words - words that bear weight of this world

lovely - as always
xxoo

Selina
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16 posted 2003-06-07 02:05 PM


Very beautiful, romantic words.
Startime55
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17 posted 2003-06-07 02:12 PM


With coming of morning sun
the warmth from your tender love
shows petals where dew has clung
awaiting the kiss of love

*sigh* such a wonderfully inspiring poem...Well done, Bill...




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18 posted 2003-06-07 05:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you have a heart that shines with innocence that is bound to forever make your loved one feel happy and special, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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