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Life without you
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Life without you |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Life without you would be like the lost words that no one would say Like the soudless breeze that blows through the days. Life without you would be like Peanut-butter without jelly Like the world of rap Without the famous Nelly. I want to feel you touch me I want to hear you need me I want to see your breath When there's nothing left to say. Without you there are no more good days. I want you forever And forever I'll be there When you need someone to hold When you need someone who cares. Just stick with me And it'll all work out Because without you I'm like A light that's burnt out. So be there for me And you'll get in return A light for you by me That will always burn. ~*~*brezee*~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This has a real powerful yearning pleading message...well done. |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
bravo bravo! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"So be there for me And you'll get in return A light for you by me That will always burn."  very cool |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice write, I felt it |
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