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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-06-04 07:04 PM




Karma on my mind

Simply put,
purely a level
of destiny,
you and me,
but kaleidoscopic beliefs
lend not to ease
the thoughts of this
lovely chemistry

so come on Karma,
say it’s so
say I’ll know
the destiny
wrought for me...

Come on Karma ~

kaleidoscope in ~

let me see
if I’m going to like
where I’m going to be

let me see past
the mirrors of color
of greens and blues and
purple's light
into the yellows of
the night
into the reds of the soul
and that white
that surrounds us all

Karma, contrail into
my mind and unwind
the mysteries
and see past all histories
and on into the
vagaries
for I would
have some
eccentricity

then mix it with
electricity
but never any
duplicity

for that is not my style

let me lean a
little into the
night, make
it all right
with
sincerity

and Karma, while
you are about all
of this, my friend,
take a moment
to never let
certain nights
end
at least not
in the corners
of my mind where
Karma happens
all the
time.


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-06-04 07:15 PM


....let me lean a
little into the
night, make
it all right
with
sincerity....

Truly enchanting poem, dear Karilea!
Love, Margherita


Dark Angel
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2 posted 2003-06-04 07:41 PM


Thanks for bringing this back up Karilea. I missed it the first time.

A very delightful a read and yes enchanting too

hugs

Maree

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3 posted 2003-06-04 07:56 PM


smile...

I'm not going into all of THAT--HERE.

giggling...
but I do have this sudden urge to listen to John Lennon.

"we all shine on..."

Thanks Kari!

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4 posted 2003-06-04 08:51 PM


Karma, contrail into
my mind and unwind
the mysteries
and see past all histories
and on into the
vagaries
for I would
have some
eccentricity


Karilea, I am so glad that you dug this out of the archives. Excellent. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Duncan
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5 posted 2003-06-04 09:09 PM


'let me see past
the mirrors of color
of greens and blues and
purple's light
into the yellows of
the night
into the reds of the soul
and that white
that surrounds us all'

Love this Kari!  

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-06-04 10:01 PM


K-

I'd like some Karma tonight to let me know the right path...let me see what is going to be.    

Very Beautiful...soft and smooth.


Patricia

DozenRoses4UV
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since 2003-06-03
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7 posted 2003-06-05 03:28 AM


Beautifully put my friend.

DozenRoses4UV

ethome
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8 posted 2003-06-05 03:41 AM


Oh I've reached nirvana....sigh....Once I got through those "kaleidoscopic beliefs"
I became more colorfully minded.
Seriously.....very clever writing as usual.
Love the last verse a lot!
Regards
Eric

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9 posted 2003-06-05 04:29 AM


oh, thank you for the repost
brian sites
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10 posted 2003-06-05 10:01 PM


into the yellows of
the night
into the reds of the soul
and that white
that surrounds us all


I needed to read this tonight
thank you Kari

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