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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-06-04 11:31 AM


Come with me to a dark highway of night.
Take my hand, come and we'll fly like owls at a great height.

Over silver rivers reflected by moonlight. Over seas and oceans, nobody knows we're here they are dormant in dreams.

We have all of the night to fly and see. Look... a black forrest full of sleeping ravens and crows and there...softly flowing streams.

Silence save for the sound of nature, i dont want this feeling to end.
This night i could live forever, this freezing snow smothered scene i could live for real not pretend.

My heart races and exhileration overcomes my senses as i pass over coastal towns below me.
But it all has to end and the beautiful morning shakes dreamers alive and i am no longer free..!

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-04 01:06 PM


sad but beautiful
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-06-12 04:17 AM


you make a night flight tempting...I love owls, especially snow owls
junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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3 posted 2003-06-12 05:48 AM


this is a lovely write and takes the reader with you. i especially loved these lines.
My heart races and exhileration overcomes my senses as i pass over coastal towns below me.


But it all has to end and the beautiful morning shakes dreamers alive and i am no longer free..!

hugs from june xxxxx

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-06-12 11:53 AM


Rose:

this is lovely - ahhh our dreams . . .

if only sleep will one day become reality

nice imagery
xxoo

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-12 02:46 PM


Reminds me of the times when I have beautiful dreams...wish they all were beautiful...James
Canon_D_111
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6 posted 2003-06-12 10:28 PM


yes...my dreams bring worlds of reality...then back
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