Learning... (a real rictameter, I think)

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Open Poetry #26

Learning... (a real rictameter, I think)

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

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0 posted 2003-06-04 10:29 AM

With first rictameter gone wrong, it seems I have learning to do.

So, I do what poets do and wrote this poem for me and you.
~~~~
Learning
Of state of mind
Greater self we shall find
Freedom to seek truth and explore
Opportunities to become much more
With knowledge gained, new mind shall speak
Overcome thoughts of meek
A higher peak
Learning
~~~~

[This message has been edited by Patricia (06-04-2003 10:32 AM).]

Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-06-04 10:30 AM

Brava! A perfect rictameter--in form and content! Well done, my friend!

Special, warm hugs,
Linda

Sunshine

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2 posted 2003-06-04 10:34 AM

BINGO!

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-06-04 10:35 AM

Patricia - seems like learning never ends but just keeps on going...

BC

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-06-04 10:36 AM

Thanks Linda. It seems my diamond is a bit off. I tried to rectify this with spacing...as you can see it didn't work.

I am learning though...boy, am I learning!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-06-04 10:37 AM

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-06-04 01:14 PM

looks good to me! great words!

Marge Tindal

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7 posted 2003-06-04 04:13 PM

Patricia~
Ya' did it !! Yahooie-O !

~Success
With just a tweak
Classroom time pays off big
Join me on the merry-go-round
Lots of fun spinning around and around
What a little study can do
Rictametered form
Perfectly done
Success~

Now you'll find these forms and LOTS more.
Not all fun ... not all easy ... but that's why Teach is so patient with us~ (Ahem !)

Good on you, gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nightshade

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8 posted 2003-06-04 04:34 PM

Way to go Patricia !!
Well done !
hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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