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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
I sit alone and wonder Where our love went so wrong. There's nothing left of you now - Just memories and our song. What made you change your mind, Like lightning from the blue? My heart thought you were the keeper kind, A love that was so true. All the years we spent together, Building our dreams up. Why is this so easy for you, But for me it is so rough? You told me you were leaving, Without a shed of tear. My heart doesn't want to believe That you will never again be near. I guess this time it's really over, Not really meant to be. Because if it truly was, You'd be right here with me. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
welcome to PIP! this poem was quite touching. i look forward to seeing more from you. -majnu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this feeling well... Welcome to Passions  |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Sunshine - Thank you for the warm welcome! majnu - Thank you for your kind words. I will definitely be posting here more often. passing shadows - Thank you, also, for the kind welcome! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 Bravo very good opening write Welcome to passions! bernie  [This message has been edited by bslicker (06-06-2003 08:31 AM).] |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Welcome to Passions! Good poem... I've had the same doubts as well. Here is something to think about, though: maybe that person was placed in your life for just a small period of time, to help you in some way. And it was "really meant to be" because although it hurts that they're gone, they left behind a legacy to live on... Blessings, El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is a very touching debut, sweet friend, I know these trials and anxieties so well and I send heart hugs your way in hope you find the answers as you are bound to find a love that can relate to you! (sigh) God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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