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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-06-04 09:38 AM

Hope you would see me
Hope you would hear me
SingIng through the night
If you only see me
In this every day
Every way
You will only see me
Standing here
With my heart opened
For you
If you only see me cry
Would you come closer to me
And wipe away tears for me
And wipe away tears for me
If you only see me laugh
you would see the way
And the things I have done
Looking for your love
And bring with you

If you only see me
Every day
Smiling upon a bright sun
If you only see
Like this.......

[This message has been edited by vandana (06-04-2003 08:38 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-04 09:44 AM

I am sure that to see you like this..would melt his or anyone's heart...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-06-04 10:12 AM

What I see from all the poetry of yours that I have read, is that you are a beautiful, sweet and gentle soul.

Warm hugs,
Linda

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-06-04 10:29 AM

vandana - Nice write...

BC

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-06-04 10:33 AM

Yes, Vandana...just

like this...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-04 11:15 AM

Vandana, I really do like this poem.
It's very pretty.
Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-04 01:07 PM

very pretty writing

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-06-04 03:47 PM

(big hugggssssssss) And we are all blessed to see you just as you always are...a loving, compassionate, and friendly spirit and friend! (kiss on cheek) May he always see you this way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2003-06-04 05:31 PM

If you only see me
Every day
Smiling upon a bright sun
If you only see
Like this.......

So many look and do no see! 'Tis sad indeed.

Wonderful write ... hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

9 posted 2003-06-04 05:58 PM

AWWW!!! Beautiful. Heartfelt. Warm. Magnificent. I loved this poem. It made me smile and made me cry. A cavalcade of emotions. Well done.

Junior Member,
yv

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