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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-04 08:16 AM



~*~

Lying in your loving arms
By shore on moonlit night
Listening to the lapping waves
Ours is a love so right

I feel your breath upon my cheek
As you hold me tenderly
My body becomes electrified
With your pleasuring of me

Heart to heart with arms entwined
We pledge to one another
Your love for me and mine for you
Shall not be torn asunder

Lying in your loving arms
By shore on moonlit night
Listening to the lapping waves
Ours is a love so right

~*~

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-04-2003 08:18 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-06-04 08:19 AM


Earth Angel
Are you talking about Angels? LOL

Peter J Marcroft
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2 posted 2003-06-04 08:26 AM


I like this, the repat of the first stanza reinforces the pleasant love that you seem to try and paint.  nice work
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3 posted 2003-06-04 08:28 AM


NIcely done... a pleasant read for this morning and a nice thought to start the day..

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-06-04 08:34 AM


Linda - m'mmmm, I like moonlit nights...

BC

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5 posted 2003-06-04 08:45 AM


Very lovely Linda..
Warm and sensual thoughts here..nice.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

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dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-06-04 09:03 AM


Fabulous...James
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-06-04 09:19 AM


Mr. T. ~

Yes, my dear sonneteer!--Angel love!

Angel hugs & kisses,
EA

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-06-04 09:20 AM


Peter ~

Thank you! That was my intention!

Huggums,
Linda

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-04 09:21 AM


Captain ~

Thank  you!  Your "pleasant" response has given me a "nice" start to my day as well!

Morning hugs,
Linda

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10 posted 2003-06-04 09:22 AM


BC ~

Oh, Bill! Everybody knows that you love moonlit nights! I think you invented them!

Love & Moonlight,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-06-04 09:24 AM


Nancy ~

The words, "warm and sensual" have special meanings when they come from a poetess such as yourself!  

Love & Light,
Linda

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12 posted 2003-06-04 09:25 AM


James ~

"Fabulous"?!?---Thank you very much!!!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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13 posted 2003-06-04 09:39 AM


Wonderfully written poem, Earth Angel!  I'm new to the forum and I've already taken a liking to your writing!  
Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-06-04 09:43 AM


VBN ~

Why thank you, dear BallNut!--and welcome to Passions!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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15 posted 2003-06-04 09:44 AM


Linda, we love those moonlit
nights, too....they're real nice!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-06-04 09:48 AM


nice

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17 posted 2003-06-04 09:49 AM


Oooo... *melts into the ground* Everyone deserves a love so right! I love the repeating stanza. Very beautiful!

Yours,
Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

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18 posted 2003-06-04 09:54 AM


Soothing love and romance on a moonlit night! Nothing finer ....

Great write dear Linda.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-06-04 10:19 AM


Ethel ~

Oh, I bet you do love those moonlit nights with your huggy bear Gary!

Huggums,
Linda

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20 posted 2003-06-04 10:20 AM


Vandana ~

Thank you!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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21 posted 2003-06-04 10:21 AM


Fading Away ~

"melts into the ground"--ooooo! I like that! It is soooo poetic! Thank you!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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22 posted 2003-06-04 10:23 AM


Marti ~

"Love" & "Romance" are my middle names!--as well as for many other Pipsters--yourself included!  

Huggums,
Linda

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23 posted 2003-06-04 01:18 PM


beee-utiful...just beautiful!
Earth Angel
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24 posted 2003-06-04 01:25 PM


Dixie, you are some chick! tehe I've always wanted to write that in a reply to you, and now I have!

Thank you for the beautiful reply!

Huggums,
Linda

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25 posted 2003-06-04 02:38 PM


Lying on a moonlit beach, engulfed by the foam of the pounding surf...

It’s moments, like this...


Very nice, Earth Angel,


This POEM, was so right!


Richy

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26 posted 2003-06-04 03:24 PM




(smiles) Oh Linda, this made me tear up because I dream so much of finding my angel and holding her hand and kissing her and making her feel special forever as she makes me feel special in my dreams! (kiss on cheek) Yay, here's special angel hugs for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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27 posted 2003-06-04 03:26 PM


Richy ~

"Lying on a moonlit beach, engulfed by the foam of the pounding surf"...that was lovely, dear Rich Man!

Luvs 'n hugs & pounding surf,
EA

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28 posted 2003-06-04 03:31 PM


Noah ~

If I were younger--or you were older---no, I think I prefer "If I were younger"--and we lived closer, this "angel" would definitely love to hold hands with you as we walked along the beach and then had the most loving of all kisses imagineable!  

Loving hugs,
EA

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29 posted 2003-06-05 03:55 PM


Beautiful, sensual, tender... I think I'm gonna pretend I wrote this one... okay with you? LOL

Excellent work, angelic one. *S*

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2003-06-05 04:02 PM


Suthern ~

By all means, Dear One! Pretend away!

Thank you for being your own sweet self!

~ May you soon be making your own wonderful memories of love & loving...

Huggums,
Linda

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31 posted 2003-06-19 10:38 AM


Perfect love... Sounds wonderful!
Beautifully written.

Deb

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32 posted 2003-06-19 12:21 PM


Ya did it again. Made my heart melt with the first stanza:

"Lying in your loving arms
By shore on moonlit night
Listening to the lapping waves
Ours is a love so right"

Ending it that way as well...Just a wow is all I have. You truly are an amazing writer. It takes a touching poem like this to melt the way  I did. I kind of did one of those "Awww slumping down into chair" type thing. Thank you for sharing this. I really liked it, in fact...It's being safely placed into my library so I can go back and melt again and again...and also remind me of my friend and I who are in love but are taking it slow because of past trouble's we've had with our relationship. This just makes it all the better. Exactly like him and I...Thank you! *wipes up the melted body off the floor* Peace. ~*~Kirah~*~

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

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33 posted 2003-06-19 01:25 PM


Deb ~

Why thank you for saying so! With that kind of sweetness coming from you, I'd say your rose is in full bloom!  

Earth Angel
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Kirah ~

Golly gee, Kirah! Whenever my feathers need a little fluffing, I now know who to go see! lol
Thank you, so much!  

Angel blessings,
EA

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35 posted 2003-06-19 02:24 PM


Hey, I only speak the truth. Peace.
Ha! I did it...


"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

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Earth Angel
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36 posted 2003-06-19 02:43 PM


Kirah ~

     

Happy faces!

WindSong
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37 posted 2003-06-19 11:57 PM


OK ok...Hold your horses! Just kidding. Hehe. Here's a good ole smile face just for you EA tis funny...peace.

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

Earth Angel
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38 posted 2003-06-20 09:44 AM


Kirah, I love it!--and I'm so happy that you are having fun with the smilies! That puts a smilie on my face! lol







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39 posted 2003-07-08 02:27 AM


Beautifully written.  
Earth Angel
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40 posted 2003-07-09 09:32 PM


Eloise ~

Thank you for the "beautiful" comment to my poem!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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