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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-06-04 07:47 AM


  
Photo From Pandoras Box Sigs

~~*~~
Love songs
Of yours and mine
Are so special to us
We both love most kinds of music
Though the ones we call our songs are love songs
They have sweet and romantic words
Soft music to dance to
Slowly swaying
Love songs

~~*~~

Dancing
Very closely
Slowly to soft music
Flowing through the soft breeze of air
We can feel the beats of each others hearts
In perfect rhythm as we dance
Holding each other tight
Very romantic
Dancing

~~*~~

The moon
Shining o'er us
As we dance on the beach
The bright stars twinkle overhead
As  if  in  rhythm  with  the  soft  music
Between the light of stars and moon
We see each others eyes
Sparkling brightly
The moon
~~*~~






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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-06-04 07:53 AM


garysgirl
Good morning, we are happy today,
a lovely write.

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-06-04 07:58 AM


garysgirl - a very tender soft loving romantic write...

BC

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3 posted 2003-06-04 08:05 AM


Beautiful and expressive.  You are a true romantic!
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4 posted 2003-06-04 09:11 AM


Yes, Seymour...we are  

Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-06-04 09:13 AM


Thank you, Bill. I'm glad that
you thought so.....
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-06-04 09:19 AM


Thank you Goodhrtd. I really
appreciate that.
Hugs  
Ethel

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(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, love songs are my favorite too and I dream ever so much that I can have a girl I could sing these to and make her heart melt and cry happily in joy while dancing to the stars! (big hugggssssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, you are a true romantic and may your Romeo always come and sweep you off your feet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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8 posted 2003-06-04 03:50 PM


Thank you so much, Noah. I always look forward to
opening your reply. I know that you always have something
really nice to say. I appreciate you, Noah.  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-06-04 04:16 PM


fabulous!!!!!

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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10 posted 2003-06-04 04:17 PM


Good gravy that was just SO pretty!

                        

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11 posted 2003-06-04 04:24 PM


this is lovely. romantic and heartlifting.
hugs from june x

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12 posted 2003-06-04 05:05 PM


I found myself swaying to the pictorial and the poem! This was a very touching post, Sweet Ethel!  

Huggums,
Linda

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13 posted 2003-06-04 05:08 PM


loved it
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14 posted 2003-06-04 05:32 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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15 posted 2003-06-04 05:41 PM


Hi garysgirl  (Lucky Gary)  I read your lovely rictameters and got so exited about writing one I forgot to answer.  Thanks for telling us about this form.  Joyce
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16 posted 2003-06-04 06:23 PM


Ethel,

Lady, you are sooooo good with the rictameter.  Flow as smooth as silk!  Incredible.  I bow to you, Lady of Love Rictameters!


Patricia

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17 posted 2003-06-04 07:36 PM


garysgirl...These are beautifully written. They are so tender and romantic. I love this form of verse. And, you erite so well in this genre' ***Ivy Rose
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18 posted 2003-06-04 11:09 PM


WOW!! I come back on line and see all of your sweet and encouraging replies. All of you are so nice. Words don't express just how much I appreciate all of you......
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Glenn,
thanks for thinking they are fabulous.
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Sharon,
thank you Lady. I'm so glad that you liked them.
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June,
thanks. I'm glad that you thought so.
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Linda,
I know. If I knew how to put music just
right on these, I would on this one. Thank you.
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Vandana,
I'm glad that you loved it. Thank you.
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Julie,
I'm glad that you thought it was beautiful.
Thanks, Lady.
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Joyce, thank you. I'm glad that you got excited about
writing a rictameter. LOL  I'll go look for yours. I love to read
them and write them...especially about Gary.
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Patricia,
why thank you. I really appreciate the compliments.
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Ivy Rose,
thank you . Your sweet words are very much
appreciated.
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Well, my friends, I couldn't give you all smilies individually.  So, these are for all of you........
            

Heart hugs to each one of you,
Ethel  

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19 posted 2003-06-05 05:03 AM


wow! you're on a roll!
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20 posted 2003-06-05 08:21 AM


Dixie, I'm glad that you like it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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21 posted 2003-06-05 04:26 PM


Ethel Mae, painting beautiful pictures of your love, is something you are so good at. i could feel the sweet summer breeze you spoke of, and indeed all the love that was in 'the air' ! i can't wait to have some evenings just like that with my rhys. We're lucky to have love aren't we, and you are never forgetting that are you? you're amazing.

I love your celebrations of love in your poetry friend, you know what's important, and that shows in any style of poetry you choose to take on.

much love to you, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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22 posted 2003-06-06 01:33 AM


Hi Gemma, my friend  
It's so good every time I see you here. I always know that you will have said something in your reply that's very sweet and nice. You are a real encouragement to me, friend.  

Gemma, yes, we are very lucky to have love in our lives. There are so many people in the world who would love to have what you and I have with our Honey's.  And yes, you and I do know what important in life. Don't we?

Take care, my friend, and I hope to see you again soon.
Heart hugs to you            
Ethel Mae

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23 posted 2003-06-07 02:02 PM


Ethel:

I do believe you have written three different stories here that meld into one

It is beautiful . . .
and I do believe -
I've had it - seen it felt it touched it and lived it and will again -

you inspire me with your words
always do
xxoo

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24 posted 2003-06-07 02:09 PM


Very romantic, reminds me of me and my husband
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25 posted 2003-06-07 02:24 PM


MAGNIFICENT ROMANCE at its very best...

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