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Until The Moon
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Until The Moon |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“UNTIL THE MOON” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When moonbeams shine upon you, and your eyes close to twilight, you glow like heavens embrace, in dreamy shadows of the night… Your thoughts are whispers in my mind, as you lay and I touch skin smooth, visions are real in my eyes that I see, yielding fingers tingle me to soothe… When eyes of longing meet ones of want, desires well to meet passionate lips, one joining will be of loves embrace, until the moon passes through its ellipse… ~~~~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When eyes of longing meet ones of want, desires well to meet passionate lips, one joining will be of loves embrace, until the moon passes through its ellipse… Just absolutely beautiful, Bill. I love it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic words Bill! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Romantic is the word, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very romantic...very soft and sensual write Bill.. Much enjoyed the moon's ellipse. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always the romantic..and always fine writing.. I enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Triple ooooo's and aaaaaaw's....  You've captured my poetic heart! Luv's 'n such, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
you glow like heavens embrace, in dreamy shadows of the night... Very romantic! Beautiful poem. I enjoyed this muchly --Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your thoughts are whispers in my mind That's love, dear Bill, tender and passionate. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You always find another way to express your loving sentiments. Joyce |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Another dazzling beauty of a poem. You have a very romantic soul. And, it comes through in your poetry. This poem is seductively romantic and, full of my favorite, the moonbeams from a star-struck Moon. ***Ivy Rose |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Bill, Now this is the way romance is supposed to be. I am sitting here listening to lyrics to a song (from daughters radio station.) The notions these young ones have of romance. Yikes. Thank goodness I can come to BC for romantic verses. Just beautiful.  Patricia |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Gorgeous, heartfelt, and captivating. An astonishingly wonderful story of romance. Leaves me tingling with love and happiness. Junior Member, yv |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Bill. I adore poems about the moon. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
When eyes of longing meet ones of want, desires well to meet passionate lips, one joining will be of loves embrace, until the moon passes through its ellipse… can't it stay after the eclipse too? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I hope the moon never passes through it ellipse if it means your words upon my lips. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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