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chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

0 posted 2003-06-04 04:42 AM

¡¶ home town ¡·

The east breeze blows,
and the winter pass by
the green grass and the were road watered by the dew
come on together
the window were opened, last night
the color of peach include the rain
flooded all the the living traces
I am a solitude ,a solitude
always be fear of the sun
twenty-one years
go through the street at night
But,my hometown! As you know
I still is a boy
Usually carry the schoolbag
Glue the full mud in the new suit
on the way home

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-04 08:04 AM

the window were opened, last night
the color of peach include the rain
flooded all the the living traces
I am a solitude ,a solitude
always be fear of the sun

an interesting structure of images... and the poem itself an interesting read but I enjoyed the lines above the most...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-04 08:53 AM

Enjoyed...James

chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

3 posted 2003-06-04 09:28 AM

thanks for my friend!
but i must go now ,it is time to go to bed.

in my country is night,but yours are day

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-06-04 09:28 PM

Hello my new best friend.

I love your work.

You write in images strung along together and the result is a peaceful, meditative quality. And that's not easy for me to achieve. (Yes, I call myself "serenity", but I am more fire than water, I fear.)

Please do share more with us.

chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

5 posted 2003-06-04 09:56 PM

ok,my friend i will translate as possible cjinese poem as i can,
i like exchanges¡¡our minds here.
i love you and all friends here.
.
but i think my english do not very well,so there may have some new words,i do not know

i hope you can explain it foe me,thank you.

hug
chinaesestone

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-06-04 10:33 PM

Thank you for giving us some glimpses of your life in your home town. --and don't worry about your English! It's far superior to my Chinese!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

7 posted 2003-06-04 10:45 PM

thank you my friend

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