»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
¡¶I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream¡·
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
¡¶I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream¡· |
|
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
¡¶I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream¡· I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream Like I can not detain the losing days and trees Close whth the norther sandstorm How sadness it is My love and me went astray in a river together And we swear we will not be back But thoses wallows and peachblossom in that spring Still come on time Show the same temperature and details But,I can not relate the losing case For example,some feather The death of that fish Some rose fall into the sky stop Turn to blue |
||
| © Copyright 2003 ZhangHua - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome to Passions and I enjoyed your first poem very much. Great visuals! I did wonder though was this a computer error or intentional? ¡¶I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream¡· I can¡¯t Anyway, welcome and I know you will enjoy the people here as they are all great! |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thank you for your words, i come from china,this is the first time i come here,even the first time i come to a Foreign web, i like poem, i want get your Opinion ablut my poem. and this I can¡¯t is a computer mistake.  [This message has been edited by chinesestone (06-04-2003 02:27 AM).] |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow... the visuals of this are just stunning, and you made my mind work in a different way. (Getting my mind to work at ALL is an accomplishment. So I DO thank you...)  |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
you are welcome,i sent a new poem,want your pinionΪ¡£thank you. i want to become your best friend;> [This message has been edited by chinesestone (06-04-2003 02:58 AM).] |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
Mysteria you Homepage is very good,q also have one http://bj.qq.com.cn/u/s/shanshangshi/index.htm welcome to my homepage ,but it is writen in chinese. |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more. This was interesting. Thank you for sharing. Ethel....garysgirl |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
i do not know wether your know chinese poem,this poem is a chinese poem which i wrote last month, i translate it into english, i am very happy there are so many friend can share my feeling. i also like your poem.it is Pure and unadulterated¡£¡¡ |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssssss) Oh my gosh, this is a gorgeous debut filled with deep colorful imagery, sweet friend, I hope all is well and may that bird be released from your heart and fly free and warble its song of life and happiness with you! I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
Mistletoe Angel are you a college student? i am glad to meet you. my frienbd,i was study in a chinese college now? and you? |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions! The images in this poem are very beautiful. Thanks for sharing your lovely words. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thank you,read my poem, best wishes for you my friend,i hope one day you can come to china.;> |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! How wonderful that you are from China, and will be able to share examples of your poetry. We're big fans of Haiku and Senryu, Tanka and other forms of writing from your country, so perhaps you can teach us as we welcome you to our many blue walls of poetry. Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I enjoyed your first post very much. I look forward to seeing more of your writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thanks for my friends, my e-mailis: 93055251@163.com you can keep teach with me by mail, but now,the time is 22:00 i must go to bed, i will come back tomorrow. hugs my friend |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed the imagery and thoughts presented in this poem, and hope you will stay here and read and post often.  |
||
|
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Beautiful!!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hi chinastone - I went to your website and wish I could speak Chinese as well as you do English You sure did a lot of work on it, and I will try to visit again, and find the guestbook.  or please leave me the link to it, and I will sign it gladly. |
||
|
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
i should say thanks for all my frienfs, i had saved you cards,thank you¡¡for you have gaven me so much funs. of course,i will come here frequently,because i iove you.and my dear friends,this is my guestbook,you can leave a message here! http://www.poemlife.com/PoetColumn/guestbook.asp?vAuthorId=shanshangshi and this is my homepage http://zuodu.126.com or http://shanshangshi.126.com or http://home.91i.net/shanshangshi/ hugs stone [This message has been edited by chinesestone (06-04-2003 09:26 PM).] |
||
|
nightblue New Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 4 |
i see |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to passions...Your poem is beautiful! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
