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0 posted 2003-06-03 10:18 PM



Dig into my mind
Curse it, deceive it
Make the moon cross
Paint it blood red
Make this feeling
Make it go away

I'm all alone
I sacrifice my whole
To watch it fall
Deeper into the abyss
Beyond my savior
I can't be here anymore
This loneliness reveals
How much has been erased

I look at you
I look at me
Walking away
Like I always have
Eating away what remains
What purity stains
What length is still left
That can't be crossed
That can't be made

I try to hard
To be turned away
Left in the shadow you walk
In the typical day
I can't swallow this
The same grief you hand me
I can't swallow this
The same pain inside

That I can't run away
And can't hide from

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1 posted 2003-06-03 10:43 PM


"I can't be here anymore
This loneliness reveals
How much has been erased

I look at you
I look at me
Walking away
Like I always have
Eating away what remains
What purity stains
What length is still left
That can't be crossed
That can't be made"


oh, this is so incredibly sad.....

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2 posted 2003-06-04 04:32 AM


I can relate to what you write...
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