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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-06-03 09:01 PM



Some moments seem gone
forever out of our sight
but some are right there
within touch of the light

Postponed not ended
stalled due to unseen circumstances
marooned and trapped
Only for a fleeting second

Yet when love plays in
that second seems to be hours
and those hours to days
until eternity is the music that plays

I beg of you not to give up hope
but have faith as strong as steel
patience that forgets the second hand
that ticks to slow on the watch you own

Forget me not for I am here
I wander only in one direction
that is near to your heart
and far from gone

So stay up late
leave a light on
your Rogue will return
long before the next dawn



© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-03 09:03 PM


very good write,,,  i enjoyed...

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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2 posted 2003-06-03 09:15 PM


yes, very good I like this a lot
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gemjop
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4 posted 2003-06-05 03:39 PM


Thomas, reminding someone to keep hope. something we all need to do for eachother.

so you're a rougue eh? he he.

enjoyed this read, it made me smile.

lots of love, gemma xxxxx

Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2003-06-05 09:16 PM





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