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A Sadness Within....

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 06-03-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

A SADNESS WITHIN...

You said I had a sadness
I didnít know it showed
I carry it inside me
And itís with me wherever I go
My life was changed forever
When I was a young teen
You see my one true love was taken
When he was only 16
The car that he was driving
Skidded out of control
And he died a lonely death
By the side of the road
I cannot bring him back
I cannot seem to let him go
But often in my dreams he visits to say hello
Would my life be any different
If he were still here with me
Iíd like to think it would be
But thatís something Iíll never get to see


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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QjQ
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1 posted 06-03-2003 08:25 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

thoughts of past written well,,,
touching...

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA


2 posted 06-03-2003 09:29 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

This is both sad and touching.

Cold hands means a warm heart

EagleOne
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3 posted 06-04-2003 02:14 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

I know the sadness my friend, but those memories also carry a smile, remember the smiles! So good to see you writing again, take care!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

passing shadows
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4 posted 06-04-2003 03:50 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I know the sadness too
JamesMichael
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5 posted 06-04-2003 09:00 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice expression of your feelings...James
Nan
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6 posted 06-04-2003 09:42 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

How nice to see you again Roniece - This is a sad tale, though beautifully written - Do grace us with more of your work - It's been far too long...
Earth Angel
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7 posted 06-04-2003 09:45 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

So sad, so tragic--but perhaps in some ways, he is even closer to you now.

Beautiful, emotive writing...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel
twinkyfl1
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8 posted 12-17-2006 03:36 AM       View Profile for twinkyfl1   Email twinkyfl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twinkyfl1

Sorry for your loss...Glad to see how you were able to express yourself thru your words.. very healthy way of sharing and healing.

To thy own self be true

Balladeer
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9 posted 12-17-2006 09:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

cannot bring them back....cannot let them go. That sums it up very well..

 
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