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My Secret
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My Secret |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There are secrets no one ever shares. Yet the hush of our breath - Speaks of every desire. Listen with your flesh... as I whisper something warm across your neck. This is my secret. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Listen with your flesh... as I whisper something warm across your neck. This is my secret." whew...is it just me or did it just get VERY hot in here?!  loved this  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shivers.... TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eric, now don't you know that our minds are somewhere "out there" today... smiling... enjoying... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
nerve endings tingle listening to your secrets whisper another... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That one gave me tingles in my neck!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ericc, Oh what your poetry does do to me! I guess the secret is out. Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice touch...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy yur read |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
...I don't even know what to say...That was just awesome I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, now I wonder.....what other secrets might finally be revealed from that first smile? (big huggggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Wow... it DID get hot in here! Beautiful; deliciously overflowing with passion... teasing and tempting with sensuous whispers... what a sweet secret you have. Wonderful write.... I love you, Moca |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
very well done!!! jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh, could you..would you..whisper to me once again. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and what a beautiful secret it is - I love reading you Ericc . . . xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, you certainly do know how to whispers your secrets, Sir.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your words have the power to actually manifest as the hush of breath across my neck ... quite a deed dear Eric! Across the world your secrets are enjoyed. Huuuuuuuuuuu..... Love, Margherita |
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EllinneT Junior Member
since 2003-04-04
Posts 12 |
excellent great job will you check mine out too |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo...nice job! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
 I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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