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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-06-03 09:06 AM


Dogs, can be trained
If you can teach me to sit
I must be your dog

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-06-03 11:05 AM


this kind of disturbs me in some ways, but if you INSIST on a milkbone, here ya go!

woof!



actually, I loved the point of your poem.
now sweetie, "here ye go boy, get the frisbee!" Sigh, forgive me. sometimes I hate my species.

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-06-03 11:53 AM


cool!
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3 posted 2003-06-03 12:48 PM


? LOL at this piece 'woof' tale.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-03 12:53 PM


Where are you coming from with this canine tale? Can you roll over as well?

Warm hugs,
EA

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-03 12:55 PM


Jason - hehe

I see sarcasm here . . .

(smiling)
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-06-03 12:57 PM


Now, SIT!!, Jason  LOL
This is cute....  

Gina Culliney
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7 posted 2003-06-03 07:33 PM


Goodnite nurse!  and I thought I was the only one in rough seas! The day you become trained on the paper instead of the tree will be a cold day in hades when they are all doing take out for icecream down there!  Lol!  made me do a double take on this
one!

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