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July Evening.
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July Evening. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Solitary swift soars effortlessly like a speck, in a firmament of mauve clouds. Long faded blue clouds, float in the distance,like tropical islands. The wind whispers through the leaves,slowly getting colder as summer counts down. Jet planes break the hush and pass by the burnished copper and amber remnants of the setting sun. Echoing calls of songbirds, pay homage to the day and ascend high above the trees and houses, into the slowly drawn curtain of night. Dark and silver blue sky,signals the begining of twilight.Smoky black clouds pass by the moon,rolling slowly by. Stars flicker like fireflies, markers of our time and place in the universe,the life of planets seem immortal. What may tommorow bring? a new and eventful day? The world turns slowly, but our lives are less than a flicker of a star, in the full nature of the cosmos. Time so precious, so little... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"What may tommorow bring? a new and eventful day? The world turns slowly, but our lives are less than a flicker of a star, in the full nature of the cosmos. Time so precious, so little..."  stunning! This is fantastic!  |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
It is a wonder how you create such magic with your fingertips. I can't help but comment on every poem of yours that I see. I'm simply hooked. You've made a die hard fan out of me. Junior Member, yv |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
again you paint with your words so well |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very true, very beautiful, enjoyed this |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What may tommorow bring? a new and eventful day? The world turns slowly, but our lives are less than a flicker of a star, in the full nature of the cosmos. Time so precious, so little... Wonderfully thought provoking. Reminds me to make the most of the time we have here. Every day is a new opportunity to do such.  Patricia |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful imagery, and with words to make the imagination soar. Very nice. Deb |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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