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Edder
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0 posted 2003-06-02 12:23 PM



I'm on a flight of whimsy,
and though it may seem flimsy;
the excuse I give is a need to live
a life of little frenzy.
I hope I don't seem lazy
if I stop to smell the daisies.
For, I've found, the world goes 'round
whether or not I'm busy.
So, pardon me please, if I chase the breeze,
and act a little crazy!

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SEA
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1 posted 2003-06-02 12:25 PM


definately smell those daisies!! (my fav. flower) this is so great
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2 posted 2003-06-02 12:26 PM


Your pardon'd,, go crazy
good one

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-06-02 12:27 PM



Smiling at this...  
So glad you shared your 'flight of whimsy'.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-02-2003 12:28 PM).]

Poe_Pot_Pie
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4 posted 2003-06-02 12:28 PM


I love it! Fresh! New! Short!

Nice ending!

Edder
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5 posted 2003-06-02 12:37 PM


SEA- thanks for the read. glad it made you smile!

bslicker- thanks for the pardon, it sure beats the "strange looks".

vlraynes- thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Poe_Pot_Pie- thanks and BTW...i don't know how to write anything long!

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-02 12:43 PM


very cool write!
Edder
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7 posted 2003-06-02 12:51 PM


Hi Dixie it's good to see you here. thanks for reading!
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-06-02 01:53 PM


LOL, loved this bit of whimsy!
thanks for the chuckle

Edder
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9 posted 2003-06-02 11:28 PM


you're always welcome Kacy!
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10 posted 2003-06-03 03:43 PM


^-^! Do I need to say it? I think you know what I'm going to say... {{Hugs}}

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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11 posted 2003-06-03 04:37 PM


Isn't fun to just let the words fly free!

Warm hugs,
EA

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