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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-06-02 11:35 AM


window pane

looking thru the window
cloudiness within the pains
blurred memories
once cleaned
clear to view
we first met
smudges gone
life goes on
memories
now crisp


bernie

[This message has been edited by bslicker (06-02-2003 11:36 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-02 12:31 PM


"blurred memories
once cleaned
clear to view"

just (((hugs)))

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2 posted 2003-06-02 12:36 PM


life goes on, yes
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3 posted 2003-06-03 11:42 AM


quote:
memories
now crisp


I dig this description..though it also reminded me of potato chips...

congrats on your 1000th post!


ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-06-03 12:36 PM


Outstanding verse Bernie.
Deeply touching indeed! TD

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5 posted 2003-06-03 12:39 PM


Oh, I do know whereof you write--and you have written of it so well!

Warm hugs,
EA

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6 posted 2003-06-03 01:06 PM


Bernie, I really like this.  
hugs  
Ethel
(Psstt!! I like the new picture, too!)

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7 posted 2003-06-03 01:12 PM


We can see so much through a window pane.  I enjoyed this

quatro

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