Open Poetry #26 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Let me see your eyes at the start of day. let me wake at your side and see your beautiful face,lord i pray. Let me always feel your touch, through day and night. Let me breathe your fragrant skin, that fills my heart with delight. et me hear your whisper and voice,as i hold you close to me.let me taste your lips, feel your sensuous softness, that sets my heart free..! Precious heart ive loved you from the start, little by little, i die each day we are apart. Winter comes and the ice and snow outside are melted by my love. melting the carpet of white, white as a dove. my solitude is only broken by thaughts of you, alone i travel by book to distant lands, across seas of blue. The dark forrests of my mind are troubled by hiding things, in a jungle full of evil, razor sharp plants and insect stings. At the end of it, you, like a beacon shine, show me the way, guide me to your love so sublime..! |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
If ever I have felt love it came from this poem. So close to my heart your words are and they remind me so much of the feelings I feel for another. Thank you for setting my heart free. New Member, yv |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Love just happens to be my favorite topic..and you express it well! Beautiful piece..enjoyed evey word! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This one is my favorite of yours, I had to come back and read it again....so beautiful, lovely,..blessed she is that she has your words of love so deeply expressed,whoever she is, she is lucky et me hear your whisper and voice,as i hold you close to me.let me taste your lips, feel your sensuous softness, that sets my heart free..!wow!loved this line!Let me always feel your touch, through day and night. Let me breathe your fragrant skin, that fills my heart with delight...write more. more love poetry...please [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-12-2003 04:28 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very nice Rose - I miss mine too . . . xxoo |
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