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Goldboat
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0 posted 2003-06-02 10:01 AM




   ---By  Little cotton-padded jacket (СÃÞ°À)
   ---Translated by  Goldboat

Darling, you and I watch the clouds outside, squatted down, our heads raised,
the blinding white light flashes in your eyes and makes you sleepy.
In the sky, a bird quickly flies past, your nose suddenly loses its sense of smell,
In agitation, you grab a handful of autumn wind and smash it upon the ground, ants flying up at it.

Darling, I know we both have sorrow to deeply hide,
I feel your breathing soul spin in my body, not willing to leave.
The days are the clouds outside, having no limits, never returning.
I shiver, my soul paces back and forth on your body, I am nowhere.

Before the dark night falls, you abandon the roses and the garden, the clouds grieve for themselves.
I am the star in the night, overlooking all that pass under, but I cannot see myself.
You kick down your door, not feeling distressed or uneasy, what¡¯s left of life moving towards the end.

Darling, do not dream more, it does not matter if the gorgeous clouds disappear,
the innumerable green hills and the splashing rivers will bury us. Stars are eternal.
Time leaves with the clouds, and so does pain, but we still watch the clouds outside and listen to the sounds of heaven.


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1 posted 2003-06-02 10:26 AM


very interesting
a nice interpretation (I hope) and for me, a pleasant experience to read someone I've never read before

Goldboat
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2 posted 2003-06-02 12:23 PM


Thanks!!!
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