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monochromatic blues tune (revised/archived)
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monochromatic blues tune (revised/archived) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Today I sang the song of you in the palest hue, a monochromatic blue. Arctic winds blew in from the north, chilling me to the bone, reminding me that once again I'm singing alone. How was I to know the song we sang together would die giving birth to our chorus of Love? Seems the notes were all flat. And not only that, they were mere minor notes to your ears. For me? it was a major crescendo, a cacophony of turbulent emotions tossed about recklessly, like 3rd rate rock'n roll. Now all I can do is sit here and sing the monochromatic blues, missing you. Once again, I'm singing solo. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-02-2003 01:01 AM).] |
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Dreamless Decay Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 13MO |
well, gotta say that was awesome "Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain." |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sad feeling and strong thoughts. I always knew you were rowdy at heart! *smile* You know even Pearl would sing soft blues when her heart ached. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, hello Dreamless,  welcome to Pips! Thanks for taking time to read and reply.Ice, LOL, rowdy, huh? I've had a couple of rowdy moments. (SHH..that was a long time ago.) Yep, I've sang the blues and a little 3rd rate rock'n roll. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love them blues and now you made me go and put on Dianna Krawl seeing you are not here to sing - hey, I didn't know you could sing? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, once upon a time I was on stage, but I never felt comfortable performing unless I was loaded, and when loaded, couldn't perform very well. LOL, I was always better off as backup harmony or messing with the equalizers, pushing the controls, or re-filling the glasses.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the best songs are sung...in a soft voice to someone who hears the heart... enjoyed this... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Good morning Capt, thanks for listening. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm listening too |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
fine writing and great imagery.thanks for sharing your work. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful solo, though sad. Jason |
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