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eminor_angel
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0 posted 2003-06-01 08:20 PM


3:28 am
Too early again
I hunt for a Coors Light
To lull me back to sleep
But I find only a lone can of root beer
Like the floats I ate on sunny days as a child
Before I knew that floats had fat and calories
And that childhood was better than everything that lay ahead
I should have had warm milk instead


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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-06-01 08:34 PM


interesting thought progression here

that last line could be your title

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-01 08:44 PM


nice write,, good thoughts expressed...

name it  "nightmares"

QjQ

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3 posted 2003-06-01 09:27 PM


Wonderful write, Well done

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-02 07:20 AM


Like this...I suggest "A Lone Can of Root Beer."   James
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5 posted 2003-06-02 12:31 PM


Very interesting. I do enjoy short poetry. I find it quite refreshing.

For a name, try: Woka Woka Woka

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