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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-06-01 05:34 PM


I miss the gentle kisses
that you placed on my brow
as we fell asleep each night

They always seemed to start
my dreams of us being king and queen
of a land without judgment

A place to call home
no monsters attacking
only a wonderland

Our own Fantasia
where light is like a liquid
pouring across the fields

where our wildest fancies
only held back by our on restraints
no limits unless we made that choice

A choice that was not an option
as we flew and danced in our never never land
until the sunset woke us up the very next day

I miss your kisses
I want to hold you again
so we can visit our dreamland

The Rogue awaits


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1 posted 2003-06-01 05:41 PM


I miss your kisses
I want to hold you again
so we can visit our dreamland


very nice closeing.....

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

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2 posted 2003-06-01 05:56 PM


very good thomas

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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