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Open Poetry #26

Rasberry Chocolate

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-01 11:48 AM

Rasberry Chocolate

How I long for chocolate,
With the loving grace.
A word whispered through my ears,
Like rain drops in the desert.
For twice I dream,
In the dark of night.
For love will carry me to my resting place,
Where faeries sprinkle dust over my feet.
Where would I not be if weather doth permit?

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-01 11:50 AM

This is a sweet poem. I liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-01 11:55 AM

I'm NOT a chocolate eater, except for RASPBERRY chocolate.
Now I need a sweet snack, in addition to this post.

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

3 posted 2003-06-01 12:09 PM

This is beautiful, it made me cry. I'll remember it forever. Can I please have permission to have it read at my wedding?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-01 01:18 PM

this is good...nicely done

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

5 posted 2003-06-01 01:22 PM

Eminor_angel, you have my total permission. I would love to think that my poems are being read on the most important day of someones life.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-06-01 02:23 PM

Your lovely verse is a savory treat. And now I hear the music of the ice cream man outside. Gee, I wonder if he has anything in raspberry chocolate?

BTW, I love your name, Poe Pot Pie...

Patricia

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