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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-06-01 03:28 AM

are you positive?

when the
   darkness stacks
         and boils
do your eyes
            contract
and your skin
expand?

does your hair raise
     like arms
  imploring?

are you
     a trellis-boned
revelation
     of
wild white ivy?

will you reach
    for the
finger
       that
   descends?

you will
       never
           be
             the same

you will be lightning

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-06-01 03:30 AM

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-01 03:31 AM

ditto

loved this!
and I needed a good diversionary tactic tonight.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-06-01 03:48 AM

does your hair raise
     like arms
  imploring?

are you
     a trellis-boned
revelation
     of
wild white ivy?

oh yes, my lovely---I say YES.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-06-01 12:32 PM

Struck...
and blinded.

I know someone has grabbed you up
for her very own....

should she ever drop you
I'm waiting to be your second
#1 fan....

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2003-06-01 12:40 PM

Very electric
Nice write

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-01 05:04 PM

Bri?

you've been speaking with K
I swear - ask - this reminds me
ohh geez I do have chills . . .
amazing writing
speechless here
not what you meant but what it means to me

positive yes
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-01-2003 05:04 PM).]

Ishmael
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 51

7 posted 2003-06-02 05:06 PM

Positive?....Negative? Aye, there's the rub.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-06-03 03:39 AM

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-06-03 12:38 PM

Felt the strike of this shiver down my spine...well done Brian. Wow!
TD

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