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22NICK22
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since 2003-05-29
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0 posted 2003-05-31 08:39 PM



A blood-red checker board
Velvet train tracks
The turquoise chess match

An insomniac awakens
Positive and negative contrast
Scrambling breakfast
Alternative contraceptions
Slid into his fake disguise
With wondering eyes and a charming smile
Like a snake...
Uses his tounge to find victim forty-nine

The hypnotic lure-trap
The rain dance
Front page headline
Tomorrow morning

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-06-08 10:36 AM


Interesting metaphors.....
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-06-08 11:03 AM


This is very interesting

Cold hands means a warm heart

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