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22NICK22
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since 2003-05-29
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0 posted 2003-05-31 08:30 PM


Usually
The vacination of the sky
Usually
Palming the breath of reality
Usually
In the midst of a sleepwalk
Usually
Submerged within two shoulders
Usually
The master, never the laborer
Unless
The inner-slave awakens...

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-05-31 08:38 PM


I like this very unusual format, and especially the vaccination of the sky.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



22NICK22
Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54

2 posted 2003-06-02 11:24 PM


Usually
The vacination of the sky
Usually
Palming the breath of reality
Usually
In the midst of a sleepwalk
Usually
Submerged within two shoulders
Usually
The master, never the laborer
Unless
The inner-slave awakens...

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